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    Avatarmariantj

    I foudnt this poem I wrote in April 2007, eight months after the termination. It’s funny how you never forget. Just thought I’d share it

    Everything

    i sat in bed and waited
    for the pain to begin
    i sat and waited
    for the end

    “it will only hurt a little”
    they said
    “i will love you forever”
    he said

    i sat in bed and waited
    for a flow of red
    i sat and waited
    for it all to end

    “it will be over before you know it”
    they said
    “you’re doing the right thing”
    he said

    i sat in bed and waited
    for life to flush away
    i sat and waited
    for the end

    “its so simple”
    they said
    “ill be there afterwards”
    he said

    i sat in bed and waited
    for the pain to go away
    i just cant take it
    it all needs to end

    “im goin to die”
    i said
    “how could you do this”
    my mother said

    i sat in bed and waited
    for life to end
    the pain is too strong
    make it all end

    “why is everything so dirty”
    they complained
    “because death doesnt come easily”
    i said

    i sat in bed and waited
    for love to end
    i sat and saw
    hope end

    “its all done”
    i said
    “i dont know what to say”
    is all he said

    i sat in bed and waited
    for the pain to begin
    i sat and waited
    for my life to end

    #26496
    AvatarEvangeline

    Hi there, thank you so much for sharing something so personal, I know that it must’ve taken so much strength to bare your soul like this… it’s so sad, especially when you’re able to relate to it on a personal level.
    Much love eva

    #26497
    AvatarKat92x

    reading this really got to me. It’s so easy to relate to, everything about what the family say and the boyfriend. this poem is really hitting. thank you for sharing it..

    #26587
    Avatarlove001

    this made me cry i terminated 4 days ago 🙁 :unsure: :S

    #26589
    AvatarMeg11

    Awww, sweetie, just remember it is ok for you to cry…don’t hold it in…we are all here for you and I am so sorry that you have to walk this difficult path set before you now….Love Meg

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